08/29/09

the comfort zone truck haven empowerment zone

by sexykool

the comfort zone truck haven empowerment zone is designed to create jobs, businesses, and empowerment to the youth and young adults throughout the saint louis region. a plan was submitted to the Mayor of stl, Mr. Rodney Crim, Mr. Otis Williams of the SLDC and Alderman Antonio French. three years in the making the city pulled the property all the work was designed for the site. eventhough i will not stop looking for a new site. 4658 rosalie was the perfect site for the comfort zone truck haven empowerment zone. i asked citizens what they think and they love the idea of youth and young adult being employed.

• Pros: best way to lower unemployment rate and crime
• Cons: low crime rate, low unemployment rate

06/28/09

Disgraceful, disgusting, trash

by ki83ki

*I'm looking at this week's Evening Whirl, and am appalled at the grammatical errors in a paper put out for others to read. A HS newsletter is more professional than this junk. This mess is embarrassing. There's a person complaining about no positive news about African-Americans the St. Louis Post Dispatch right next to an "article" praising Ronald Regan (who in case you missed it was racially intolerant ), and bashing the "directing of this country" which happens to be lead by an African-American. If there weren't so many photos of STL beauties (found on all but two pages, one of which happened to have her actual vag unmistakably featured) they might be able to focus on substance. If there's an editor he needs to be beyond fired. "This is the same area where a brutal rap (e) (I'm not allowed to type the word on citysearch) occurred a few years ago, after the woman was boned after jogging along Skinker" was actually written in an article. If you can't spot what was wrong with that sentence aside from the insensitivity you need to go back to school. This paper is evidence that the St. Louis public school system has failed far too many.

• Pros: Alerts community of crimes
• Cons: Simple mistakes, Poorly written, Insensitive to victims

02/10/09

I like reading the paper

by jazzyin2009

When i first saw the whirl i liked it.I was only 12 yrs old and my grandmother use to always take it away from me sayin dont read that.I was like i need to know whats goin on in the world the other papers dont tell you about.I like reading it i buy it every week.Even though you can keep the pulse of the city smaller and list more news articles.Keep up the good job!